Techneon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mgs: Sts (previwe)]

Work on sound

Your art/animation was great, but the synch and sound was way off. You should have used subtitles.

If you need actors go to the LegendaryFrog forums, you'll find no shortage of actors there who will be more than willing to help (especially since you're a girl)

Just keep at the writing side of things and you'll do a lot better

[Tetris Termination]

Not bad

Nice idea of a guy stuck in a tetris setup. It would have been a little better if it was a little more hectic, like blocks constantly dropping or the guyabout to climb out when some lines vanish.

Other than that, I loved the moscow structure appearing in the BG, and the last part, seriously didn't see it coming.

[Alex Kidd]

Genius

that was one of the few sprite movies thats actually made me laugh out loud.

great job!

[Viruses are Bad]

Short

This reminds me of the Super Burly Brawl from Matrix Revolutions. But it didn't really finish, you just had an explosion and then thats it. So we have no idea what the outcome its.

The overall animation was pretty good though, it would have been a little better if it was in a faster frame rate, so it'd look smoother

[DeaF]

Stylish, but flawed

that was some damn fine animaion, smooth and well coloured, but the background made the movie a little hard to follow.

also you need a preloader, so we can start when we're ready and a end/replay screen so we know when it's over

[Mario's Mistake (1up)]

oooh pretty

The overall presenation was very good, all sprites were sharp, and properly sized. Nice use of 3-D effects and the sound was also well done.

Oh and the outtakes were funny!

[McMatrix]

Odd fusion

Hmm, Matrix mixed with Fast food and Cereal companies. I must say that's something I'd never expect to see. Still, as a big fan of Matrix, I did enjoy the little references to the movies.

However it was a little too graphics intensive, so I got a crapload of slowdown.

Good job anyway and congrats on Daily feature/Front page

[sharlarks]

Unique

I must say, that was very odd. But it was funny, nice job.

I liked the music too

[Razorblade Treat]

predictable

was ok, no prizes for guessing the ending, the voices were recorded with a lot of background noise, which was a bit annoying.

Otherwise, good movie, good, not great

Armbar responds:

Yeah, it's a bit hard to get good quality recordings. I cleaned it up as much as I could. Although I hope you aren't refering to the background music when you say that.

[Hit That]

lacks length

"whoah, this is really good, HAHAHAHA! that was funny, heh heh, nice effect........... oh it's over..."

that was pretty much what went through my mind when I watched this. It was really, really well done. Some of the effects you used were excellent. But then it just stopped, it's arupt finish leaves me with an empty feeling, it's just seems so unfinished.

If you only wanted to make it short, you sould have edited the song, like make a cut from the end of the 1st verse, to the last chorus, it's an easy jump cut that would have made it sound just as polished as the visuals were.

none the less, good work, very good work